Average rating: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Level of importance: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Level of validity: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Level of completeness: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Level of comprehensibility: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Competing interests: | None |
This MS reports a meta-analysis of students' IQ score changes from 1940 to 2020. The meta-analysis was well done and the data are reported in a transparent and informative manner. I have no revision suggestions for the analysis and the data reporting.
The results of this meta-analysis are very important for the many reasons outlined in the MS discussion; they are a wake-up call about developments in higher education today.
I believe some parts of the MS would profit from additional, minor copy-editing. For example, a few paragraphs are very complex and in my view they would deliver their message more clearly and effectively if broken into separate shorter paragraphs, each with its own distinct message. The para which begins with “Our findings have several far-reaching implications …” illustrates this problem; it raises many important issues each of which deserves its own para.
Similarly, a few sentences are too long and very difficult to read and they should be separated into two or more sentences. With this goal in mind, I have marked up the MS with comments and suggestions. I am sending the marked up MS to the first author because it appears I can't attach it here.
I like the discussion's focus on stakeholders who need to know about the results of this meta-analysis: Educational institutions/instructors, employers, professionals who often use educational attainment for estimating premorbid IQ, and young people who are considering pursuit of higher education and ought to reflect on the IQ composition of the classrooms they will be joining.
I like what the discussion says about implications for professionals that use educational attainment for estimating premorbid IQ scores. This message is crucial for many different professionals including counsellors, clinical neuropsychologist, etc. However, I am less sure about the paras in the discussion that concern Dr. W, S, and M. While these paras underscore that even professions don’t seem aware of how old IQ scores ought to be adjusted for the Flynn effect, these paras still depart (and perhaps distract) from the overall aim of the MS which is on IQ scores of students (not on professional who are ignorant of the Flynn effect and thus in violation of their professional ethical obligations). Perhaps footnotes could be used for highlighting incompetence of a subset of professionals.