Review of 'Mozambique Public investment in water and sanitation sector and the targets of the SDG6'

1. Use the standard term (SDG6)

2. should we use objectives for goals?

3. Access to safe water and sanitation services is also determined by the water resources development potential other than investment in infrastructure

4. Again let us be consistent whether we want use goals or objectives

5. The objective of the study should be brought out clearly just before the methods and materials are discussed.

6. Under sec, 2 "Methodology and Materials"; line 1; use the word "study" instead of "article"

7. In table 1: include the year this was prepared

8. How were the comparisons for the datasets done?

9. PQG should be written in full the first time it is used. This applies to all other abbreviations

10. Sec. 3; paragraph 3; Explain briefly why SDG6 has largely been a rhetoric in many African countries

11. Sec. 3; paragraph 4; line 6: Which year does "Currently" refer to

12. Sec. 3; paragraph 4; line 7: When you use these % e.g. 55.7% of population; it is important to give the actual population as well for comparative analysis. Population is dynamic and just a mere % may be misleading. 

13. Sec. 3; paragraph 5; line 5: What explains the slow coverage growth rate in (IOF2014/15 and IOF2019/20)?

14. Page 7; paragraph 3; line 2: correct the word "inconstant" to "inconsistent"

15. Page 7; paragraph 3. Is there a direct correlation between the public sector investment, coverage rate and the capacity for the sector to absorb the allocation? This need to be clarified